Monday, July 16, 2012

Red Dawn Pt. II

They were here. The Russians had sterilized the base of any resistance within an hours time. They were emboldened by their accomplishment and now the deuterium core research facility was their reward. The only thing preventing a strategic Allied defeat was 18 inches of steel reinforced concrete. The Russians brought explosives.

“Well, if I die today, and at least, delay their advance, I’ll probably have a high school named after me.” Walt consoled himself as he tried to structure a plan of attack in his head. The exosuit was powered to beyond critical. Walt knew he’d need every last watt of electricity to even entertain the possibility of surviving. And with a loud crack, the Russians had broken through.

“‘Sup guys? I’m the official Spetznaz welcoming party.” Walt taunted over his suit’s loudspeaker. The Russians replied with a flurry of machine gun fire. Knowing the constraints of his armor, Walt knew he couldn’t play the role of bullet sponge for much longer. He ran towards the advancing line, snagging a forklift in each hand and made a gory scene, too macabre for even Poe to put into words. He meleed his way to ground level expecting better news. Instead of a small special forces operation--the type the lab had at least considered a contingency plan for--was a full on invasion force.

Walt knew if the Axis powers were able to secure the fusion cores and retrieve the Allied research, the war would be over. He couldn’t let that rest on his shoulders. He sprang towards the base fuel depot and left off a lightning bolt from his suit’s reactor. Walt had successfully announced his presence.

To be continued...

3 comments:

  1. Epic!

    You've got a lot of the elements here. You should go ahead and elaborate on the battle scene, though, instead of saying it was too macabre for Poe to describe. Think about the scenes from Beowulf, with Beowulf nailing Grendel's arm to the rafter, blood of the Danes flowing on the mead hall floor, etc.

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  2. Yes!! I would LOVE to hear all the gory details! I definitely agree with TM on the idea that you should go ahead and elaborate on the battle scene. The idea of him picking up two forklifts as weapons is reminiscent of Ripley's endeavor with the queen alien in Aliens where she fights it with a power-loader! I wanna hear about all the epic skewering!!!

    She's my hero.

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  3. Sell this script to a game developer so I can buy this and play it on my xbox. A battle scene with some explanation of weapons used would be interesting.

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